There I was on Saturday morning, up on the roof, staring westward and waiting for the Space Station; 0610 and four minutes to go. The just-past-full moon was overhead, haloed by the thin cloud whipping past. Southward, a great swell of grey cumulus rolled towards morning, surmounted by a great grey fin, like that of a pilot whale caught in the act of breaching. The brighter stars, and Venus, shone out of the clear patches.
But no Space Station. Wrong sort of cloud.
A bat, wind-tumbled and fluttering, like an autumn leaf but with a greater sense of purpose, fell across the sky.
As I went back down through the skylight, I caught the moon's reflection in the dewfall on the flat roof, and thought, but did not say, "Moon! Moon!"
Actually, I may have said it. Quietly, obviously.
I was thinking of the Ted Hughes poem.
Full Moon and Little Frieda
A cool small evening shrunk to a dog bark and the clank of a bucket -
And you listening.
A spider's web, tense for the dew's touch.
A pail lifted, still and brimming - mirror
To tempt a first star to a tremor.
Cows are going home in the lane there, looping the hedges with their warm
wreaths of breath -
A dark river of blood, many boulders,
Balancing unspilled milk.
'Moon!' you cry suddenly, 'Moon! Moon!'
The moon has stepped back like an artist gazing amazed at a work
That points at him amazed.
That description of the cows unfailingly and vividly brings back the sense of times in my past. Though I had to move to the big city and study Eng Lit to learn the ancient rural craft of catching the moon in a bucket.
How nice to know that I'm not the only one who goes outside at odd hours, hoping to catch a glimpse of the sunlight reflecting off of the ISS!
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, a bright moon makes such things difficult to see, since it tends to brighten the entire sky.
Ilove to see the moon, and the shadows it casts.
ReplyDeleteI can smell those cows.
Love this poem.
ReplyDeleteIs that Monkey on the roofline?
ReplyDeleteLucy
what a wonderful, evocative poem!
ReplyDeleteIt does, doesn't it, Angel? -though it would have to work v hard to obscure the space staion, I guess. I was up there supernova spotting the other night, and may well have seen it, but couldn't distinguish it from the other faint-dots-in-far-distance...
ReplyDeleteMe too, Anji! Cow smell is hard to shake of, as it were, isn't it?
It is, Lucy. Or possibly Mynci, of course.
*waves to Deb and Nix*